
I’ve been writing bits of dialogue all over the place, but at the AFTRS library I’ve run into a set of film scripts and decided to take a look at what one looks like. I chose Network which is a movie that I really like, and which I remember as being quite talky. Here’s some impressions.
- Nearly everything is ‘visual’ in a way that I’m not used to writing. So where as I’d have something like: ‘He wonders if that’s true. Can she even know that? He knows now that she’s said it, she has to defend it.’ the farthest the script goes is to say ‘For some reason, this knocks him out.’ But even this is really information for the actor and director to work visually from.
- The formatting makes very clear the differences between what is said on screen, and what is not. There are scene delimiters. Also stage and camera directions.
- The meat-text in the script is quite bad: ‘Two roaring drunks’, ‘silently flit and flicker’, ‘reeling along and hooting it up.’ It is not literature but is trying to give direction to wide variety of people in the most immediate, direct way possible. Tasteless cliché, and flowery language seem to be the standard (I had a scan of some other scripts. But I guess real people talk that way, and you aren’t being yourself in a script you are mostly being someone else. Someone who doesn’t read Bellow and Dostoevsky after dinner.
- The dialogue however, is tack sharp. It seems a different set of skills is required to be a good screenwriter as opposed to a good novelist.
- Really important stage and sound directions, and characters are capitalised: DARK, BUZZING, HOWARD BEALE etc.
- This is so different to photography. I know nothing about this stuff. Yet.
- Seems like the director already has a lot to work with by the time the script is done. This particular script has detailed directions on nearly all aspects of the production. Does the director really not play a part until the script is done?
- There is an awareness of who is in the room when, and who someone speaks to. Again the goal is that a whole set of people can get appropriate directions from the script.
- Some of the dialogue gets pretty long: half a page and so on.
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